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Death V2

21:25 Jun 23 2009
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falling to floor

being a not like before

being up and about

I used to be able to laugh and shout

now looking at the lights

as slowly the night

creeps in

all around me is sin

but this light just shines

showing I am all the sign

that I am dead

knowing I had bled

to death

knowing I took my final breath

as I slowly walk

feeling like rock

from side to side

as I seem to glide

seeing parts of my life

as I collide

with the light

feeling excite

and fear and confusing from the light

and feeling the fright


COMMENTS

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evilsandwich
evilsandwich
23:18 Jun 29 2009

awesome ^_^





KinkyLilVamp
KinkyLilVamp
02:13 Sep 23 2009

i like it :)





MisUnderStood09
MisUnderStood09
19:02 Dec 16 2009

cool poem! loved your use of diction! clever! :)





FadedMemory1024
FadedMemory1024
21:52 Mar 22 2010

Wow this is an amazing poem. pretty simple but it has meaning.





Bloodrose19
Bloodrose19
19:55 Jul 14 2010

wow beatiful read mine kay





deathangelsdarkrose
deathangelsdarkrose
22:58 Dec 19 2011

I like it :)








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